Aw.. you had me at captain.. adorable <3
i'm enjoying how you made her character had actual development, not just a wiki page saying she wasn't a sue... and i'm looking at you star treek wiki.
That is a great determined look.
I just want to congratulate you on this. It takes a rare kind of person to be able to develop a Mary Sue to the point that they are no longer Mary Sue-ish.
Man I love me some excellent character development
And this is now favorite'd. It's rare to get a glimpse of Truth in such a four-colored medium. Thank you for summing up a distinct fan behavior and what needs to be done about it.
She had me at Apology. that shit is rare.
D' aaaawww... this makes me all fuzzy inside for some reason...
Is it just me or does her hair look less blond? Before it was like "GOLDEN RAYS OF SUNSHINE" and now its like a washed out blond.
Her eyes and face marking seem to have stopped changing as well.
It's not just you. I went back and checked earlier comics.
Now that you mention it, I see it too o.o I think it's because she is becoming a normal girl rather than a sue. Wouldn't be surprised if her "marking" fades too.
D'aaaaaaaw! I also realize this is the first time she's probably addressed him as "Captain" and not James or Jimmy-kun or whatnot XD
of course she had him at captain, the fact that she automatically called him that proves she had learned humility
OH the feels!!!
Aww Ensign, you've grown up! ^w^
awwww, I really like the ensign here
Now to get ride of those highlights and the tattoo and those earrings to make her proper.
to me, the fact that she's a now a fully realized character with believable flaws that she overcomes is enough.
Aww, it's so sweet that she finally is referring to him as captain, rather than james. Showing proper respect for once, and actually making herself more likeable.
Awww. What she said is EXACTLY how every first time character writer must feel, myself included when I started out!
Everyone has to start somewhere.
My first oc was the sueiest sue of them all.
Now SHOW ME THE MONEY!!!
Yeah! She finally has a personality!
The tables continue to turn! I wonder what Holmes's idea is.
Alright! Now go stop those Sues!
She's become very, very lovely, I love this development of hers
She called him Captain!
Finally, a step in the right direction.
Heh,let's hope..Jimmy there is a little more patient this time with Sue. And I sincerely hope all ends well with this story at that. Also..someone tell the Doctor to try not to lose any more bodily regenerations while he's at it.
Man, the character growth that's going on is just beautiful.
*sniffles loudly blows nose* Beautiful! I love how Sue grew so much as a character. We can now only call her Mary Sue by name, I guess. ^^
Aw, looks like his little crisis has humbled Jim a bit and he is able to forgive Ensign Sue. Now they can go through character development and become even stronger!!