Love it! So excited for this sequel. I gave up fanfiction for Lent. I wonder if a comic strip counts as fanfiction? For purposes of my Lenten fast, especially since this comic skewers the Mary Sues that populate too much of the fanfic I read, I am going to say its ok.
basic feedback: the font size in the two bottom left panels are a bit small (that and my eye sight is crap lol) so i pressed ctrl + "+" to read. not sure what i feel or think about this strip/series, but it interesting that i read every page that appears in my message box. (' u ')